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Before There Were Fairy Tales... Character Chart

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Character Chart for my fic~ Before There Were Fairy Tales...

5 years before she meets InuYasha, Kagome falls through time to meet his brother after the sudden, tragic death of her father. After a chance encounter with a powerful warrior, the ten year old girl finds herself making friends with a snobby princess and a demon with a serious height complex. Yet when one of her new friends is attacked, Kagome soon becomes caught up in a war that threatens to destroy the people she's come to consider family, as well as herself. This is a tale about a friendship that endures the centuries, a sacrifice that redefined the course of history and a love that defies the boundaries of time.

Pairing: Sesshomaru/Kagome
Universe: Canon
Genre: Fantasy/Adventure/Friendship/Romance

Izayoi, Kagome, Midoriko and InuTaisho Belong to Rumiko Takahashi
Tsukau, Kuenai, Mystery Characters and Plot Bunnies and Storyline Belong to ME

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

A very good working concept sketch for the characters.

Vision: Aside from my remaining uncertainty about Kagome and Izayoi's height (with Tsukau supposed to be a giant of a man, Kagome is more than half his height at 10 - doesn't seem quite right), I love the way you can see the relation between the character heights. The designs on their clothing are beautiful, and the characters are diverse in personality, which you can really see in the drawing.

Originality: I'm really not sure how to judge this on fan work, so I'm basing my opinion on style, which is clearly your own. The majority of the (visible) characters also have unique designs, being either original characters or having no existing design from Takahashi.

Technique: This is really good quality for a concept sketch, something I appreciate. The line work is crisp, and you've captured individual character personalities really well.

Impact: Overall I'm very impressed by this drawing, regardless of small things I would want fixed. This serves its purpose well of giving readers a good mental image of key characters in your story.

Well done!